Ava

Once upon a time there was a girl named Ava. She was 4 years old and her parents were off to China to study different animals for a year and left Ava’s older sister Hannah, in charge. Hannah of course wasn’t happy with this job but she had to do it anyways.

Ava had short and curly brown hair and brown eyes. Her skin was as soft as velvet. Her lips were as pink as a pig. Unlike you Ava only had 1 toy and slept on the ground with a pillow and a blanket.

It was just a regular day and as usual Ava asked Hannah if she could go outside and play. As usual Hannah said yes and Ava went outside with her only toy which was a doll. She loved that doll and took care of it very well.

Luckily she had a well trained puppy who loved her enough to play with Ava and her doll. That day they were going to play soccer but they didn’t have enough players. They asked Hannah but she said she was too busy inviting her friend so they decided to just relax on the ground.

After they finished playing, they went inside and Ava put away her doll. Hannah told her to do something away from her and her friend. Ava went outside again with a leash and walked her puppy to her friend, Isabelle’s house. They stayed for dinner.

They ate pickles, burgers, french fries, and they drank some apple cider. Then Ava went to her house again but this time with Isabelle. Ava asked Hannah if Isabelle could stay for a sleepover. Hannah said okay but only if they didn’t make noise.

During the sleepover the kids had a mini pillow fight, a sip of tea [which they thought was really sour], drew pictures of each other, and tried to use Hannah’s makeup. After that they looked like clowns. In the morning when they woke up they had bagels for breakfast.

Then Isabelle went back to her home. Ava went outside to play with her puppy when she saw a rock. The rock was a beautiful purplish blue with a bit of glowing green that made the whole thing sparkle. She held it up and opened her eyes in a whole new place. She wasn’t scared though. She was fearless but she still had the rock. She went to the first house she saw because it was raining and there were many houses.

Ava saw 5 different people who were very friendly and let her stay for the night. She even got to eat both lunch and dinner with them. They ate chicken and rice. They even gave Ava a lollipop. It was a blueberry flavored lollipop and it was completely blue. That was the first time Ava had candy and she loved it.

At bed time she went to sleep in an actual blue bed. It was the most beautiful house she had ever seen.

One thought on “Ava”

  1. Turfan Gökalp

    Sevgili Pelin,
    Okuduğum ilk hikayen AVA. Bana göre çok güzel bir başlangıç. Bu hikayen de bile senin hayal dünyanın ne kadar zengin olabileceğini anlamak mümkün. Diğer yazılarını da zamanla tek tek okuyacağım ve sonunda da genel yorumumu yazmaya çalışacağım.
    Sana başlangıcından itibaren ilk önerim Şu: YAZABİLDİĞİN KADAR HER VESİLE İLE DUYGULARINI, DÜŞÜNCELERİNİ VE HAYALLERİNİ İÇİNDEN GELDİĞİ ŞEKİLDE YAZ, YAZ, YAZ..
    Şimdiden tebrik eder, hasretle yanaklarından öperim.
    Turfan Gökalp

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